Facile Wonder

Such a commitment found
          between two
         supple mounds.
    Conjoined by touching 
         breaths, softly
               aired

 Tentative words are never 
        discovered in this 
       effervescent realm
        Lamenting sorrow
   speaks and screams out 
         from loss of subtle
                 gaze

     Held close in wrapping
         appendaged stance 
   No other beauty is known 
           to contain such 
        immutable grace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 21, 2009 at 1:37 PM
The emotion comes through your words. The centered format gives your poem a nice visual effect. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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