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Two romantic poems, two aspects of love . . . . For lovers the world's a beauteous place To love and be loved puts smiles on one's face It raises the spirits, makes pulses race And feelings of gloom vanish without trace. Birdsong sounds sweeter as they fly so high The sun's golden rays burst forth from the sky The moon and the stars lend a heav'nly glow Enchanting lovers who stroll down below. * * * * * * * You strode towards me, Godlike as Adonis Answering my prayers, just as you had promised I'd never beheld such perfection bestowed As though sculpted in bronze - made my senses implode. 'Twas not your perfections that captured my heart I knew of your chivalry right from the start Pray mark well this truth as I promise you this There's no words to describe those sweet moments of bliss. 27th October 2020

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Date: 11/4/2020 12:06:00 PM
Hello Belle Bellevue, I like both of thes poems. Enjoyyour day my friend.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/4/2020 4:22:00 PM
You too!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/4/2020 3:47:00 PM
Hello Belle I have . Enjoy your evening my friend.Darlene
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/4/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, enjoy the day too dear friend... Belle
Date: 10/27/2020 12:55:00 PM
U could make it Faucets of Love . . . . Aloha! Rico
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/27/2020 1:07:00 PM
Rico, are you talking love on tap, I know a few who could relate to that... Belle :-)
Date: 10/27/2020 9:00:00 AM
Two very romantic poem Belle... So many sensual lines of love and devotion...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/27/2020 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Silent One, very much . . . Belle :-)

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