Faces of Lonliness

On that fateful dusky evening about an year ago,
My eyes disbelieved as they watched you fade away at a distance real slow.
My happy world crashed and fell apart,
I could never gauge that I would have to undergo this at the very start.
But somehow I believe that you knew this from the start,
If only, I could have warned my, now bruised heart.

That gloomy evening I watched until I could see no more,
You, your figure your form and body any more.
From its dwelled edifice, my soul,
Began to rip itself glowing like a burning charcoal.
Now aloof from me and its temple, my soul,
Could clearly see in place of my heart is left a dirge hole.

I began to gasp for air and breathe,
The aches and pain my skin it has learnt to sheath,
To release from within me a scream, a screech or a painful yell,
But  they not, “faces of loneliness”  hide or quench and quell?

My heart, mind, body and a homeless soul seek a place for them to hide,
But cruel fate has my life exposed and opened very wide.
My sulking tears their potent energy bust the rampart of my emotional dam,
To God almighty my plea is some solace that I seek to come upon and loneliness ban.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/23/2013 8:17:00 PM
Sashi, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/27/2013 10:49:00 AM
Thanx ~ sashi
Date: 10/22/2013 10:18:00 PM
nice win...PD
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/27/2013 10:49:00 AM
thanx very much PD ~sashi
Date: 10/21/2013 11:19:00 AM
Oh my, heartwrenching words, Sashi! Congrats on your winning placement! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/27/2013 10:50:00 AM
thanx Rhonda~ sashi
Date: 10/21/2013 8:17:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Sashi
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/27/2013 10:50:00 AM
thanx Dr.Mehta
Date: 10/20/2013 6:44:00 PM
loss is hard to deal with at any age when they are close to our heart....congrats on your win...hugs :)
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/27/2013 10:51:00 AM
thanx Sandra~sashi
Date: 10/18/2013 6:57:00 PM
So sad loosing someone....congratulations on your winning poem....
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/27/2013 10:51:00 AM
thanx DOnna ~ sashi
Date: 10/13/2013 9:33:00 AM
Nicely penned poem pointing at the varied faces of loneliness, shashi
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/14/2013 8:02:00 AM
THANX Dr.Mehta
Date: 10/13/2013 8:18:00 AM
- There are so many lonely and sad destinies in this world, I get sad just thinking about it. - A really well written poem Sashi! - Wishing you good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2013 8:03:00 AM
thank u Anne Lise....~ sashi
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