Faces of Lonliness

On that fateful dusky evening about an year ago,
My eyes disbelieved as they watched you fade away at a distance real slow.
My happy world crashed and fell apart,
I could never gauge that I would have to undergo this at the very start.
But somehow I believe that you knew this from the start,
If only, I could have warned my, now bruised heart.

That gloomy evening I watched until I could see no more,
You, your figure your form and body any more.
From its dwelled edifice, my soul,
Began to rip itself glowing like a burning charcoal.
Now aloof from me and its temple, my soul,
Could clearly see in place of my heart is left a dirge hole.

I began to gasp for air and breathe,
The aches and pain my skin it has learnt to sheath,
To release from within me a scream, a screech or a painful yell,
But  they not, “faces of loneliness”  hide or quench and quell?

My heart, mind, body and a homeless soul seek a place for them to hide,
But cruel fate has my life exposed and opened very wide.
My sulking tears their potent energy bust the rampart of my emotional dam,
To God almighty my plea is some solace that I seek to come upon and loneliness ban.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 23, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Sashi, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
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October 27, 2013 at 10:49 AM
Thanx ~ sashi
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October 22, 2013 at 10:18 PM
nice win...PD
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October 27, 2013 at 10:49 AM
thanx very much PD ~sashi
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October 21, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Oh my, heartwrenching words, Sashi! Congrats on your winning placement! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Prabhu Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 10:50 AM
thanx Rhonda~ sashi
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 8:17 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Sashi
Prabhu Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 10:50 AM
thanx Dr.Mehta
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October 20, 2013 at 6:44 PM
loss is hard to deal with at any age when they are close to our heart....congrats on your win...hugs :)
Prabhu Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 10:51 AM
thanx Sandra~sashi
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 6:57 PM
So sad loosing someone....congratulations on your winning poem....
Prabhu Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 10:51 AM
thanx DOnna ~ sashi
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 9:33 AM
Nicely penned poem pointing at the varied faces of loneliness, shashi
Prabhu Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 8:02 AM
THANX Dr.Mehta
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October 13, 2013 at 8:18 AM
- There are so many lonely and sad destinies in this world, I get sad just thinking about it. - A really well written poem Sashi! - Wishing you good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 14, 2013 at 8:03 AM
thank u Anne Lise....~ sashi
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