Faces of Loneliness

Loneliness makes his usual rounds
As he listens to lonely hearts pound
He visits the woman who's up in years
And helps her dry her lonely  tears
Her children don't come around anymore
It is always loneliness who knocks on her door

He goes to the house of the little boy and knocks on the door
The boy's mother is hardly ever home 
The scared child  hides when he hears thunder roar
And his tears fall on the dusty floor
His heart races as the storm roams

Loneliness moves on to the dwelling of an old war veteran
Who  lost both legs in Vietnam
He has no dreams,  just lonely plans
Flashbacks wake him from  his sleep
And it makes him weep

Then loneliness visits those who have no home
They are the ones who are truly alone
They have such a meager existence
They've lost their souls,  their very essence
It seems they've cried out all their tears
All they've left  is a vacant stare
And when all those lonely tears  have accrued
Loneliness transforms them into the river of solitude
                                      ~~

Contest name : Faces of loneliness
Sponsor : Frank H.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 23, 2013 at 8:19 PM
Joseph, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:20 PM
another nice win...Joseph... Linda
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Joseph, I love how you gave loneliness a face...Congrats on your winning placement! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Joseph
Adams Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 5:48 PM
excellent write....congrats on your win with this fine poem :)
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Joseph..I enjoyed every face you so tenderly expressed....well done....and congratulations
Anglesey Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Very well written, deeply profound and with great imagery :)
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 3:29 PM
- A very well written poem Joseph!! - Loneliness is almost like a "disease" today .... so many lonely people .... sad. - Wishing you good luck in the contest and a great weekend Joseph - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gorelick Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 1:33 AM
Ive been working on one for this contest..but it sounds hokey next to yours. This is brilliant.. I see as big win ahead. BG
May Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:28 AM
thank you BG ....I am sure yours will be very good...
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 9:01 PM
What a personification of loneliness, good luck, Joseph
May Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:27 AM
thank you Dr. Mehta
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