Faces

White mouse with cheese runs
Siamese cat one-half paw
Behind, what faces

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Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/28/2009 1:50:00 PM

Tom and Jerry? It's Jerry and Tom in this episode. Keep rocking! and thanx for visiting my poem.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/19/2009 7:08:00 AM

nicely penned

Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/18/2009 9:53:00 PM

Clever poem, Sara. I enjoyed it. Thanks, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/17/2009 2:28:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry today. Thank you Sara. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/16/2009 7:53:00 PM

some times you are the cat some times you are the mouse, today I saw a cat in a pool table pocket trying to play pool, he lost:)

John Freeman

Date: 10/16/2009 7:38:00 PM

I see both faces, distress on the mouse, and glee on the cat's. Lol. So very vivid, Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Mary Duhart

Date: 10/16/2009 5:13:00 PM

very lovely write..mouse better be quick...lol..and thanks for the reviews on my work.

Canny Amah

Date: 10/16/2009 3:37:00 PM

Sara, this is a nice piece. Keep writing, dear. Canny.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/16/2009 2:59:00 PM

I once had a Siamese cat and know well what you wrote here. Very nice haiku you wrote here, Sara. Today my neigbour's cat scrated at my window and wanted to be caressed. The fellow might feel that I will move frome here. Will miss him! Nice haiku, Sara and thanks for commenting Staircase to Heaven. Keep your pen flowing! Gert

P Sheart

Date: 10/16/2009 2:42:00 PM

Hi Sara, You made me smile with this one. Keep writing, look forward to catching up with poetry when I get back in couple weeks! Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/16/2009 2:35:00 PM

nicely penned, good job!!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 10/16/2009 1:21:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind words on my comments page.Great words also.Teresa My oldest son helped me write this and he's the squirrel.