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White mouse with cheese runs Siamese cat one-half paw Behind, what faces

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/28/2009 1:50:00 PM
Tom and Jerry? It's Jerry and Tom in this episode. Keep rocking! and thanx for visiting my poem.
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Date: 10/19/2009 7:08:00 AM
nicely penned
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:53:00 PM
Clever poem, Sara. I enjoyed it. Thanks, Kim
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:28:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today. Thank you Sara. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:53:00 PM
some times you are the cat some times you are the mouse, today I saw a cat in a pool table pocket trying to play pool, he lost:)
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:38:00 PM
I see both faces, distress on the mouse, and glee on the cat's. Lol. So very vivid, Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:13:00 PM
very lovely write..mouse better be thanks for the reviews on my work.
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:37:00 PM
Sara, this is a nice piece. Keep writing, dear. Canny.
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:59:00 PM
I once had a Siamese cat and know well what you wrote here. Very nice haiku you wrote here, Sara. Today my neigbour's cat scrated at my window and wanted to be caressed. The fellow might feel that I will move frome here. Will miss him! Nice haiku, Sara and thanks for commenting Staircase to Heaven. Keep your pen flowing! Gert
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:42:00 PM
Hi Sara, You made me smile with this one. Keep writing, look forward to catching up with poetry when I get back in couple weeks! Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:35:00 PM
nicely penned, good job!!
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Date: 10/16/2009 1:21:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words on my comments page.Great words also.Teresa My oldest son helped me write this and he's the squirrel.
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