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Face of a Flower

Though from afar her sweet smiles stroll down my spine as I behold her flawless face- my fine flower.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Julie Heckman
Date: 4/3/2011 1:01:00 PM
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beautiful senryu, very sweet. I wanted to contact you to see if my poem went through to your sijo contest??? I'll try you in the "Soup Mail" I'm pretty sure I sent it but my computer is going bonkers. Julie
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Stephen Parker
Date: 3/31/2011 7:43:00 PM
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The aesthetical appeal of a beautiful, distant flower is parallel to the fondness of your beloved companion. A nice simile penned. Enjoyed your verse!
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Elaine George
Date: 3/31/2011 5:23:00 PM
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So very beutiful, Adeleke. Lainie
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/31/2011 1:59:00 PM
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Beautiful imagery, Adeleke, to paint the face of a flower in a alliterative way,
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James Foulk
Date: 3/31/2011 9:22:00 AM
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oh, so beautiful is this creative poem.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 3/31/2011 8:55:00 AM
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Love your metaphor "smiles stroll down my spine..." Brilliant, Adeleke! Hope all is well. Always, Annalise
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Poet Tacito
Date: 3/31/2011 6:30:00 AM
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Very touching!
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