Face of a Flower

Though from afar 
her sweet smiles stroll down my spine
as I behold her flawless face- my fine flower.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Heckman Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 1:01 PM
beautiful senryu, very sweet. I wanted to contact you to see if my poem went through to your sijo contest??? I'll try you in the "Soup Mail" I'm pretty sure I sent it but my computer is going bonkers. Julie
Parker Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 7:43 PM
The aesthetical appeal of a beautiful, distant flower is parallel to the fondness of your beloved companion. A nice simile penned. Enjoyed your verse!
George   Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 5:23 PM
So very beutiful, Adeleke. Lainie
Mehta Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 1:59 PM
Beautiful imagery, Adeleke, to paint the face of a flower in a alliterative way,
Foulk Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 9:22 AM
oh, so beautiful is this creative poem.
Haick Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Love your metaphor "smiles stroll down my spine..." Brilliant, Adeleke! Hope all is well. Always, Annalise
Tacito Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 6:30 AM
Very touching!
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