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Face of a First Date

He's a sucker for a romantic sonnet For a clear blue lake, with a full moon on it... Their lips now meeting, passionate the embrace His lovestruck face, no guilt upon it

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/12/2020 2:56:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, this is a romantic poem. I feel the romance in this poem for him. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2020 10:23:00 AM

Hello Gershon, you are welcome for the feedback. I am happy for him. Enjoy your day my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2020 5:00:00 PM

Darlene, thank you so much for the feedback, for letting me know how you feel. Have a wonderful day! :) Gershon

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/12/2020 2:37:00 AM

Lovely Rubai Gershon..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2020 12:49:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment, Jenish. :) gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/11/2020 10:45:00 PM

Great rubai my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2020 12:49:00 PM

Thanks, Caren! :) gw

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/11/2020 8:58:00 PM

Hummmm....could lead you to picture a few things. So cute. I really love this Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2020 12:49:00 PM

I know. You pictured that beautiful full moon! lol. Thanks for the cute comment, Jeanne! :) Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2020 8:09:00 PM

As long as this is a guiltless married man with his wife, I LOVE It!! and I think that is what you said at the very end (just some guys have no shame!) This little poem is adorable.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/11/2020 8:21:00 PM

Ha, ha! Thanks for the love, Andrea! As for what I said at the end, as Red Skelton (comedian) used to say: "I just do 'em; I don't explain 'em. (Men do have their secrets too, you know! lol.) Seriously, thank you so much for your support. Warm wishes, Gershon