Face of a First Date

He's a sucker for a romantic sonnet
   For a clear blue lake, with a full moon on it...

Their lips now meeting, passionate the embrace
   His lovestruck face, no guilt upon it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 2:56 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, this is a romantic poem. I feel the romance in this poem for him. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Hello Gershon, you are welcome for the feedback. I am happy for him. Enjoy your day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 5:00 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the feedback, for letting me know how you feel. Have a wonderful day! :) Gershon
Somadas Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 2:37 AM
Lovely Rubai Gershon..
Wolf Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 12:49 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment, Jenish. :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 10:45 PM
Great rubai my friend.
Wolf Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 12:49 PM
Thanks, Caren! :) gw
Mcgee Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 8:58 PM
Hummmm....could lead you to picture a few things. So cute. I really love this Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 12:49 PM
I know. You pictured that beautiful full moon! lol. Thanks for the cute comment, Jeanne! :) Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 8:09 PM
As long as this is a guiltless married man with his wife, I LOVE It!! and I think that is what you said at the very end (just some guys have no shame!) This little poem is adorable.
Wolf Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 8:21 PM
Ha, ha! Thanks for the love, Andrea! As for what I said at the end, as Red Skelton (comedian) used to say: "I just do 'em; I don't explain 'em. (Men do have their secrets too, you know! lol.) Seriously, thank you so much for your support. Warm wishes, Gershon
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