Face It!

The forces of nature are odd
So is that why we invent god? 
Our deity’s norm
Seems to be human form
And reflects this silly facade
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Uchacz Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:57 PM
but we will realize this decade to be more and more harder each time so lets face it in the end we will be nothing more than mere little pebble, and no one would think would cause harm.... Haha idk i tried your good keep writing :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Hey, are you an agnostic, by the way? There is much to reflect on in some of your more religious limericks. I feel we were made in God's image. OUr bodies are miraculous and we use only a small portion of our brains. One day I hope we have telepathic powers like I see God as having. Glad you liked Ruth. LUv, Andrea
Segal Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Great minds! ps thank you for comment, love Simone
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 7:23 AM
i am in no way trying to push my religion on to any one so i will just say that i do believe there is a God, maybe our god is nature as the indians believed, i hope! anyways i did like this poem short and sweet makes a major point and very well written and thought out! great one duke!=)Jo
Culverhouse Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Man was created in God's image.
Owens Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Funny Limerick...enjoyed...Marty
Guzzi Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Made me smile! Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 12:39 PM
The bitter pill is the life styles we live, that dictate the curse we live in, in our natural lives. Mind dominated living creates the curse we live in in our lives. We were created as God's love, but mind living reverses that blessing, and our lives become a curse. Sincerely, Mose THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS!
Palli Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 11:33 AM
I like that
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:07 AM
Well, I don't know for I did not invent him. I feel that Spirit that whispers in my heart and ear of what is right when I let him come near. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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