Face It!

The forces of nature are odd So is that why we invent god? Our deity’s norm Seems to be human form And reflects this silly facade

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Summer Uchacz

Date: 9/30/2011 10:57:00 PM

but we will realize this decade to be more and more harder each time so lets face it in the end we will be nothing more than mere little pebble, and no one would think would cause harm.... Haha idk i tried your good keep writing :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 6:55:00 AM

Hey, are you an agnostic, by the way? There is much to reflect on in some of your more religious limericks. I feel we were made in God's image. OUr bodies are miraculous and we use only a small portion of our brains. One day I hope we have telepathic powers like I see God as having. Glad you liked Ruth. LUv, Andrea

Simone Segal

Date: 2/22/2010 9:17:00 AM

Great minds! ps thank you for comment, love Simone

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/22/2010 7:23:00 AM

i am in no way trying to push my religion on to any one so i will just say that i do believe there is a God, maybe our god is nature as the indians believed, i hope! anyways i did like this poem short and sweet makes a major point and very well written and thought out! great one duke!=)Jo

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/15/2010 7:15:00 PM

Man was created in God's image.

Marty Owens

Date: 2/15/2010 3:02:00 PM

Funny Limerick...enjoyed...Marty

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/15/2010 1:20:00 PM

Made me smile! Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 2/15/2010 12:39:00 PM

The bitter pill is the life styles we live, that dictate the curse we live in, in our natural lives. Mind dominated living creates the curse we live in in our lives. We were created as God's love, but mind living reverses that blessing, and our lives become a curse. Sincerely, Mose THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS!

Susan Palli

Date: 2/15/2010 11:33:00 AM

I like that

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2010 7:07:00 AM

Well, I don't know for I did not invent him. I feel that Spirit that whispers in my heart and ear of what is right when I let him come near. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara