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Face In the Clouds

I saw your face in the clouds today; I looked up and you were there. You had said you'd never leave me but I didn't believe you and wept for days engulfed by grief. I heard your voice in the wind today. It softly called my name, your breath gently ruffling my hair. I strained to catch a glimpse of you but I saw no-one there. Your reflection appeared in my mirror today. I caught a passing glance. I thought I saw you smiling, but in a flash you'd gone and I was alone again. The loss of you is tangible. I still collapse exhausted by tears. I half look at photographs which have captured happier years, but I saw your face in the clouds today, so I know that you are near as I pause to look in the mirror or watch the gentle breeze Perhaps I should have believed you when you said you'd never leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/31/2024 10:22:00 AM
very touching and well defined emotions. i could literally see you there, in the poem.
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Date: 8/30/2024 6:27:00 AM
Poetry Soup is bringing back the classics! At first, I thot you were talking about God, but the end made me shed a tear realizing you were talking about a loved one. Well done, poet. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/25/2024 3:15:00 PM
Very nice
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Date: 12/10/2008 12:44:00 AM
Delightful sentiments and marvelous composition. Lovely language and imagery. Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith (PS would you please take a look at 'Per Ardua Ad Astra?' ...I would love your opinion)
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