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I walk through the life of silent dreams A museum of sorts I passed by my reflection Not a mirror in site I was horrified As I stared into my face No, no, I could not My eyes could not view such horrors Shut tight for fear of light The journey was long ago Where emotions floated or not The soul fell into the sea I belong to no one Thus they say I am free I belong no where Thus I am in a prison I float inside a bottle Like a goldfish in bowl Waiting to be painted Knowing too well The drawing will never be done The wilted rose shall weep One more time For the face no one shall seek Incomplete

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Judy Konos

Date: 1/25/2016 7:00:00 PM

Like the painting. Love the Poetry but look who wrote it. Cheers!

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/29/2015 11:43:00 AM

Very deep, sad and capturing write my friend , great work u nailed it....Merry Christmas and happy new year....hugs / / :) dalia.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/18/2015 1:51:00 PM

Love the beautiful poem, Arthur, !!!!!!! Love the drawing!!!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:22:00 AM

Thanks Eve, a friend of mine did this drawing,when I saw it it spoke to me, if she saw how do you paint, she would love your compliment by 1000!!!

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/15/2015 10:37:00 PM

I HOPE YOU NEVER EXPERIENCE SUCH A FORLORN AND SAD STATE MY FRIEND. With deepest regrets I have TWICE IN MY LONG LIFE and never want to again! Tremendous heart wrenching write! A7..

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:21:00 AM

That is my life, an unfinished painting.

Aurore Severo

Date: 12/14/2015 2:07:00 AM

Deep and sad, the art very good xoxoxo peace

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:20:00 AM

Thank you Aurore!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/13/2015 9:26:00 PM

So asd Arthur... I trust this is not true to life. Great word usage... ',,,like a goldfish in a bowl,' '...the wilted rose shall weep one more time.' BRAVO my friend. Best wishes, Keith

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:19:00 AM

Thank you, of course its not real life, thats worse!