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Fabulous Journey

Forty years and counting We meant to be together We meant our wedding vows The report looks too official Must be our fate You have a hard time getting dressed I button your blouse I wipe a tear that falls Wishing I could make it better Love has lasted Can love cure the body My love will sure try (For all those who battle illnesses and still love)

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Ryan Mcneil

Date: 10/26/2010 6:32:00 AM

Excellent and too true. Ryan

Troy Jeremy Nelson

Date: 3/25/2010 6:09:00 PM

sensitive

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/23/2010 4:27:00 AM

Lovely Doris you have heart that's for sure , thanks for everything Daniel

Daver Austin

Date: 3/22/2010 2:47:00 PM

I admire a person who sticks it out through sickness and distress. What a test of love and responsibility it must be. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2010 12:09:00 PM

Come and grow old with me the best of life is yet to be..The last of life for which the first was made....Our times are in His Hands...Interesting write for one so young...Mom

Skat A

Date: 3/22/2010 8:18:00 AM

Very touching. I do believe readers will be lifted with your wonderful poem...