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Smell Clean! Sometimes no rhymes do we all see. Blogs read instead can be ugly. Some peeps are creeps. So sly - they spy like moles in holes. Yes, sirs, those curs bait lambs and ma’mes. Some joke with folk or tease blog-ees Don’t mind those kind! But they can say mean things with zings to poke at folk; start fight - they bite! As hogs at blogs they squeal to feel like Kings of things. Beware them there. Shy guys, be wise. Just stay away. Trolls might one night just roam your poem; slam it; say sh#@. I think they stink with words like turds. Advice: Be nice. Smell clean, not mean! Written March 20, 2017 for Jan Allison's Fabulous Fun Footles Contest

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Date: 5/22/2017 5:55:00 PM
I so live these footles. I'm going to have to try writing them :). I've posted 3-4 new poems :)
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Date: 4/2/2017 4:58:00 AM
Stopping by again to congratulate you on your win!!
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Date: 4/1/2017 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this one Andrea. It also contains an important message. ; ) 7
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Date: 4/1/2017 7:01:00 AM
Hi Andrea, this is so funny, congrats, loved it!!
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Date: 4/1/2017 6:09:00 AM
Love how you ramp up the meanness then end with niceness! Very nice! :) Congrats!
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Date: 4/1/2017 1:14:00 AM
Big congrats Andrea for Fun Footles.Your first place as usual. Hugs
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:38:00 AM
Congratulation on your win Andrea.
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Date: 3/31/2017 8:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea & being brave enough to stand up and say something.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2017 2:09:00 PM
Perhaps a troll took him away Andrea!:-) hugs jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/1/2017 6:33:00 PM
How Beautiful of him.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/1/2017 10:06:00 AM
Hmmm, I believe someone removed their comment!!
Date: 3/31/2017 5:15:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant Andrea, congratulations on your well deserved win, Roy. :))
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Date: 3/31/2017 5:10:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This is hilarious . Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/31/2017 4:41:00 PM
Absolutely hilarious Andrea - this REALLY made me lol and I am delighted the computer put it at the top of the list of first place winners:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/31/2017 4:22:00 PM
Oh this is such an FUN footle, Andrea. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/31/2017 8:24:00 AM
Andrea, this is one wonderful run-on Footle.....nicely done...
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Date: 3/28/2017 11:27:00 AM
This is so funny
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Date: 3/26/2017 9:36:00 AM
Andrea, great Footles about blogs and trolls, your advice is taken:)
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Date: 3/25/2017 8:05:00 AM
Woah, that's one seriously long Footle, but executed to perfection. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/23/2017 10:43:00 AM
Andrea, you said so much with those few words allowed with the form. Yes there sure are some that make the blogs not a very poetic place to be ~
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Date: 3/23/2017 9:22:00 AM
Wow, you were really inspired! Well done Andrea.
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Date: 3/22/2017 8:25:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. This form of poetry I have never heard of and it seems that it would be fun to write to. Reading your poems makes me want to try new things. Thanks for the inspiration in your poetry!
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Date: 3/22/2017 6:02:00 PM
Nicely done Andrea ..best wishes
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Date: 3/22/2017 5:01:00 PM
There is latitude to read this in different ways. It's great and a lot of fun. So, you are a master of so many forms and themes. I cannot do what you do and am tempted to steal it and palm it off as my own, but I could never do that!!!
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Date: 3/22/2017 3:05:00 PM
- Small words that tell great truth, Andrea - Very well done ! - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2017 2:57:00 PM
i love the way you've combined these to read like sentences, andrea! wonderfully done...
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Date: 3/22/2017 9:54:00 AM
Really a funny footle Andrea... Enjoyed it .. Thanks for sharing... A big 7... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/22/2017 9:42:00 AM
Fabulous footles indeed here ... Enjoyed your write so much, Andrea ...
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