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Fabulous Features

Flakes sparkling 'round the lamppost's glow Floating softly on a windless night First snow watcher's- peep through the window Fading footprints white on white From midnight's stroller's- 'neath the light Winter Quintain Poetry Contest Sponsored by Francine Roberts 12/11/2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/4/2022 10:51:00 AM

This is wonderful Charlie - such a delightful picturesque vinette of snow falling on a winter night as seen in the light of a lamppost from a window! I love the contrast of images - snow and warmth, light and darkness, emptiness and abundance, witness and participant. You have put me into a scenario that I love! Blessings for your new year. Best of wishes for the contest my friend. Hugs!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2021 8:14:00 AM

This wonderful write is ready for a "F" letter contest. A cold winters night. Now for some hot coffee. Have a very Blessed Christmas and 2022......................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/18/2021 5:24:00 AM

Love how you started each line with F, and what a fabulous image you paint here:) good poem, Charlie:)

Ann Peck

Date: 12/14/2021 7:29:00 AM

You paint a lovely picture, Charles. Good luck in the contest!

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/13/2021 10:29:00 AM

AH, peeking out of the window late at night-as a child praying for snow. I delightfully remember those times so long ago. Your poem a gem my friend. I could again see that and feel that innocent hopeful expectation.. A fav.. God bless..

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/12/2021 2:44:00 PM

Hello Charles ... the picture of Christmas. Way down south here it's warming up and hopefully Christmas Day will not be over one hundred degrees - thanks Charles - Lindsay

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/11/2021 11:47:00 AM

Hello Charles Messina, yes when it snows the footprints fades. Just like when it rains all the snow disappears. Shoeing how green the grass is. Enjoy your day my friend.

Deb M

Date: 12/11/2021 7:29:00 AM

Hey Charles…. I really like the little wintry poem…..felt like I was the one peeking out the window!! Enjoyed. Debx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/11/2021 6:39:00 AM

Wonderful. Love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina