Leon Datu Poet Verse

Fabric--Leather

I strut the bars of night
Rawhide jacket with  chains
Disco gyres through punk seventies—

High on beer, Marlboro
Leather brands me-- rebel
Innocence gone from wild kisses.


Nette Onclaud Contest: Knit Your Fabric 
11.08. 17

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Susan Ashley January 7, 2019 at 10:54 PM Your wonderful imagery captures the moment in time perfectly, Leon. I remember it well. I enjoyed you compelling poem, especially your last line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2017 at 3:03 PM Very cool one. I am picturing James Dean or the Fonz!! Congrats, Leon.

Connie Marcum Wong November 15, 2017 at 2:44 AM What a great entry Leon! I can see why it is a top winner. Congratulations! : )

James Inman November 14, 2017 at 6:44 AM Interesting write Leon. It amazes me how we try to make a statement to the world as to who we are by what we wear.

Eve Roper November 13, 2017 at 12:34 PM Excellent write, Leon, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Nette Onclaud November 13, 2017 at 9:45 AM you captured the adventurous spirit of the 70s with such flair, leon...thanks for sharing and finest congrats on your stunning win!

Kim Rodrigues November 9, 2017 at 8:25 PM I can visualize the clothing and smell the smoke-filled bar. Well done!