Fabrications a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

FABRICATIONS
 spilling
  everywhere
so calm
so slight
  yet  intense
in  silent focus
 of absolute  colour
an
ongoing concious
overlapping
treasure

emanating
 a peaceful
&contagioius energy
so
vibrant
timeless
 fearless
 playful
in
colour

 texture

an
 intense
 way of life
liberated
 composing
&creative
in an
elevated setting
a duality
of natural
 happenings

in a  collage
so weird
compulsive
&
amazing
yet
so credible
&familiar
illuminated
gently
on a collaborative
journey
of  abstraction

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The Situation

Date: 7/7/2023 4:31:00 PM

I love words and the construction of these words inspire me to this style. And it is better recited.