Fabrications a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

FABRICATIONS spilling everywhere so calm so slight yet intense in silent focus of absolute colour an ongoing concious overlapping treasure emanating a peaceful &contagioius energy so vibrant timeless fearless playful in colour texture an intense way of life liberated composing &creative in an elevated setting a duality of natural happenings in a collage so weird compulsive & amazing yet so credible &familiar illuminated gently on a collaborative journey of abstraction

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Date: 7/7/2023 4:31:00 PM

I love words and the construction of these words inspire me to this style. And it is better recited.