Fabricated Holiday

dime store chocolates hoping to get a little petal for my thorn







2/5/19
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Allison Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 5:16 PM
love that last line Anthony!! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:37 PM
Nice one, Anthony. Congrats for your win.
Bianco Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm glad you liked it. I'm never was a big fan of Valentine's day I always thought it to be a superficial, sometimes hypocritical-pseudo-holiday...you know covering up bruises and mental scars with flowers and chocolates...geez-I'm starting to get a bit cynical in my old age.. Thanks for reading Anthony
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 4:13 PM
Anthony, have a Happy Valentine's Day.. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*
Bianco Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Thank you Eve.
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 12:59 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely Valentine Senryu, Anthony :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bianco Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:10 PM
Thanks for reading sunshine but I'm not sure it was lovely. Anthony
Kitchin Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:06 AM
Great one, loved the last line, congratulations on your winning placement!
Bianco Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Thanks Tania, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Jordan Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Hello Anthony, Wonderfully writtten. I could feel the emotion in this poem. Good work!
Bianco Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Thanks destiny
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