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dime store chocolates hoping to get a little petal for my thorn 2/5/19

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Date: 2/8/2019 5:16:00 PM
love that last line Anthony!! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2019 7:37:00 PM
Nice one, Anthony. Congrats for your win.
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 2/8/2019 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm glad you liked it. I'm never was a big fan of Valentine's day I always thought it to be a superficial, sometimes hypocritical-pseudo-holiday...you know covering up bruises and mental scars with flowers and chocolates...geez-I'm starting to get a bit cynical in my old age.. Thanks for reading Anthony
Date: 2/7/2019 4:13:00 PM
Anthony, have a Happy Valentine's Day.. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 2/7/2019 5:09:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 2/7/2019 12:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely Valentine Senryu, Anthony :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 2/7/2019 5:10:00 PM
Thanks for reading sunshine but I'm not sure it was lovely. Anthony
Date: 2/7/2019 5:06:00 AM
Great one, loved the last line, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 2/7/2019 5:11:00 PM
Thanks Tania, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/5/2019 9:14:00 PM
Hello Anthony, Wonderfully writtten. I could feel the emotion in this poem. Good work!
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 2/7/2019 5:11:00 PM
Thanks destiny

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