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Fabric Linen

Gossamer, gently cool, brushed against flushed hot face, like water pooled in desert land; softness kneaded with much glad wearing, not unlike the feel of mother's wrinkled hand. November 9, 2017 Knit Your Fabric Contest Sponsor, Nette Onclaud Verse Form

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Date: 11/18/2017 1:25:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Faye!! Cool that we both used "gossamer" :). Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
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Date: 11/15/2017 3:08:00 PM
wow, this is simply amazing. One of the very best I've read. Congrats for your win, Faye.
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Date: 11/15/2017 2:53:00 AM
A truly outstanding entry Faye. Congratulations on your high placement! : )
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Date: 11/14/2017 7:05:00 AM
Such a touching write. Sometimes it's more than just fabric, it's a memory.
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Date: 11/13/2017 12:41:00 PM
Excellent write,Faye , congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:08:00 AM
lovely analogy between linen's softness and a mother's kind hands... you win!.. congrats , faye, and thanks for entering...
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Date: 11/9/2017 8:18:00 PM
A lovely sentiment!
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Date: 11/9/2017 6:59:00 AM
oh Faye this is so touching, the ending gave me a huge lump in my throat. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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