Fable of Felicity

In the orchard of opalescence magnificent myriads of mellows fervently flow in fountains breathing beguile blossoms a forgotten fable ferments, in haunting hollows I hear. My heart is a restless garden with varying pulses of penumbra conflicts caressing cuddles tenacious tattered thorns singing to sumptuous serenades where brisking bubbles burst butterflies spread beautiful wings bees buzzing like ballerinas to ballads in pirouettes-- a symphony calms my anxieties descending from azure skies but my vineyard wilts in agony. A bird drops a seed of hope from a foreign land in my orchard sprouting to strive in storms emanating exotic effervescence ballerinas pause their buzz butterflies flee in fear serenades slip in streams out casting the stranger seed. I touch the seed with curiosity blissfully in my meadow melancholy melts to melodies auspicious aurora allures tender bud in lavender hues drenching my dulcet dreams in showers of chrysanthemum whispers draping my fears at dusk embrace my weariness with love Is this what I'd been awaiting a stranger I've always known Aphrodite in lilac curtains blushes to unfurl the petals my fingers touch her musings her fragrance blooms my orchard ensnaring my sapphire senses sparkling in emerald dew drops I plant her beside my window she's my fable of felicity vineyard reviving to life as tendrils ascend to witness her velvet lullabies "Sleep my love another garden awaits me" July 30, 2020 Petal, buds, blossoms, bees, birds, butterflies! Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One ~Winner: 1st Place
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Your pen did another wonderful write. Enjoy your wonderful win and day.............
Watt Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 10:13 AM
I like the ballet and symphony references. I am picturing the bees like ballerinas. I also like the seed of hope dropped by the foreign bird - so evocative. Too many wonderful alliterative phrases to mention, but I loved "melancholy melts to melodies" the most. This is such a rhapsody of emotions and garden imagery, I can see why it was selected as a winner. Keep writing gems like this, dear Aditi, I greatly respect your poetic talents. Blessings ~ John
Pandit Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Stunning, cheerful, creative..not enough accolades to describe your talents my friend. BIG congrats for your well deserved first place in Silent's contest, Aditi.
Deepa Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 5:17 AM
Excellent words utilized to describe your Orchard of feelings:-)A different take on this contest has bloomed to be a number one:-) Congratulations...!!Happy for your deserving win Aditi mam:-) you drop a seed of love and wisdom in my heart every time I read your musings:-) Keep inspiring with your powerful pen. Take care.Much love:-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 8:58 AM
This poem is so beautiful Aditi. I am Faving it! Congratulations on your deserving First placement! Blessings xxoo
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 3:46 AM
An excellent poem Aditi, congrats. :)
Ermine Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 11:44 PM
Definitely you cracked several codes here. Everything already commented, absolutely.
Brul Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Congratulations once again dear Aditi for a TOP accolade on this briiliant piece. I am mesmerized ..More power on your pen.
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 11:22 AM
- A wonderful poem, Aditi ... love the end - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 10:08 AM
"Bees like ballerinas" is just a snippet of your visually rich imagery, Aditi. I love the metaphor of the garden as a place of life nurturing your creativity. Congratulations on your top placement.
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Wow, beautiful with great imagery. Congratulations on your win in Silent Ones contest.
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 9:08 AM
What a poem! Fantastic! The vocabulary is extraordinary! Congrats on your top placement!!
One Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:01 AM
This is a mind blowing poem, the vividness of the imagery is out of this world.... Alliteration, assonance, just brilliant and I believe formatting makes a poem more pleasing to the eye and you did that perfectly... Congratulations on your first place in the contest.
Daniel Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Simply splendid, Aditi, Silent One will love this:)
Mcintosh Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Lovely images crafted here. I enjoyed your words. God bless you and best wishes in the contest
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