F Arts

Snuck out in secret
Hit me like a runaway train
Silent but violent


 *Yet Another Senryu Contest! (No 5/7/5 entries please!) Chris D. Aechtner Contest *
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Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 9:26 PM
hahaha!! Disqualified for the capitalization I bet; otherwise, I am sure it would have scored in his contest!
Culverhouse Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 2:49 PM
That is hillarious!! i would love to get your book...is this the children's book?
Neels Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 2:17 AM
Typical Mrs oops meant Mr Hall write.. On second thought nothing about you is typical.. Thanks for the laughs this morning.. Best wishes, Wilma
Evette Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 5:17 PM
I love you sense of humor. Thank you for reading, commenting and liking my poems. I'm finding my words again and your words are VERY encouraging. :-) Monica
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September 15, 2010 at 4:10 PM
lol oh this was a funny one, the second line ha ha, enjoyed this one..P.D.
Devonshire Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 4:07 PM
LOL Farts can be both silent and deadly. Very clever, Sidney! Love, Carolyn
Nutter Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Farts are always funny, best wishes for the contest, and may your aurora be a fragrant one.
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