F a M I N E Ii

F A M I N E  II

(Thousands of children, all over the world, die every day for lack of food) 

Famine:

           Fathomless
 
                       Agony

                            Mercilessly 

                                       Indicating

                                                 Nutrient

                                                       Exhaustion!

© Demetrios Trifiatis
       08 MAY 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 5/8/2013 10:07:00 PM
My dear Demetrios, I read your poem "Eternal Gratitude". My heart bleeds. And your parents from heaven must be watching proudly and contentedly "This was our dream" . I told you once that you have magic in your heart. Suffering always brings glory. May God bless you and your family in every way!. wow this one is truly word wonder! love manel
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Date: 5/9/2013 12:38:00 AM
Dear Manel, thank you for taking the time! Yes, suffering ploughs the soul, joy plants and happiness harvests! May God bless you and your family as well!
Date: 5/8/2013 5:50:00 PM
This needs to said loud and clear. maybe it will move someone's heart. Thanks for sharing....... Lucy
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Date: 5/9/2013 12:39:00 AM
Thank you Lucilla for caring and for sharing! God bless you!
Date: 5/8/2013 3:43:00 PM
Great work to bring awareness to the hunger that plagues our world..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/8/2013 5:44:00 PM
Thank you for caring! Unfortunately so few are we!
Date: 5/8/2013 5:48:00 AM
How do you write these one word acrostics so effectively? I couldn't have come up with this in a million years! Wow, you are very good at these, especially effective after reading your previous poem, they should be read consecutively! What an amazing piece my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/8/2013 6:02:00 AM
Thank you my friend! It seems the souls of the innocent guide my pen!
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