EYES WISE AND OLD

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They used to swim and play on the beach in northern Gaza. Now these ...

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Poem written for and submitted to "Children of Gaza" poetry contest, Matt Caliri, sponsor, September 12, 2025

EYES WISE AND OLD ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
We are the children of Gaza~ we’ve tasted fear, smelt burning air, a generation forged in conflict We are the children of Gaza~ our feet are shoeless and dust-caked, wartime rubble, our playground We are the children of Gaza~ our crayons and picture books destroyed, replaced with shrapnel and fear. We are the children of Gaza~ sirens are our lullabies, the news, our bedtime stories. We are the children of Gaza~ our laughter is a fragile bird taking flight between explosions. We are the children of Gaza~ we build castles of dust and sorrow, imagination, our shields against war’s despair. We are the children of Gaza~ we long for normalcy, wish for a swing set, yearning for a simple, unbroken day. We are the children of Gaza~ we learned survival before subtraction, experiencing loss before love. We are the children of Gaza~ our childhoods stolen, piece by piece, by the cruel arithmetic of war. We are the lost children of Gaza~ our eyes wide and old, hold stories we shouldn’t know.

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Date: 9/12/2025 6:36:00 PM
What a heartfelt poem ~ powerful images and emotions
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Date: 9/12/2025 8:54:00 AM
This should do fine in contest Well written Kevin
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Date: 9/12/2025 5:38:00 PM
aww, thank you, Kevin, for your encouraging comments and for your visit.
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