Eyes Wide Shut

I am looking at the world through closed eyes.
I see all the things that I wish were there.
It would be a world with no widows sighs.
Children would be taught to live without fear.
No profit from the misery of others.
Leader's first rule, "All are fed and housed".
A nation's goals, the same as its mothers.
A rivers run could not by dam be paused.
One's right to do no harm, the rulers too.
A warrior tests only other warriors.
The worst fallout would be the morning dew.
We move through a world without barriers.
Looking at the world through closed eyes means
that I can live only in my dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Burger Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Great write! Thank you :)
Karim Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 8:42 AM
This is a lyrical poem. I love how the last line ties the first line and the rest of the poem together! Great write.
Eastman Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Great write. If only...
Brown Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:46 AM
I enjoyed reading your great poetry this morning Ahellas. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
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January 9, 2012 at 2:53 PM
Oh, if only those dreams could come true. Nice sonnet AA. Thanks for sharing. Joe
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