Eyes So Daring

My mature face speaks
Eyes daring you to debate 
Such intelligence
You may be advanced in years
Yet today I am more shrewd.

Kristen Bruni's Tanka entry for "Baby Babbles"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Muzzey Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 5:18 PM
An excellent write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Nicely read thoughts of the baby in the picture, kristen
Susan Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 7:56 AM
good luck in the contest.
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