Eyes Pierced By Flakes

I'm currently doing a school project on Tetractys. I had to look at ten that I liked from the internet. In my list, this one is my all time favorite. I love this poem and how its simple but makes you think. Thank you for creating such a lovely poem. ~ Carrie

Enjoy reading your work Nette, once again this sings across the net...Congrats

I really enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, once again. It was nice to see it on the winner's list! Congratulations to you, Nette! Wonderful work!

Brings sad and poignant images to mind, Nette. I love the way you used "spiky frostbites chaffing" and "lacing sharp ache." Congratulations.

Sad and beautiful. Congratulations Nette.

melancholy, musing, intriguing...for me, it conjures the image of someone tearful at a bleak funeral in mid winter...a good rendering of a very restrictive form - congrats on your win!

Stunning piece of a poem, nette. congrats on the win

Nette, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda

dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

Nette, I like how this seemed to be a contradiction of sharpness(pain) with the softness of the flakes. Kind of a deep one for me, but I sure love the way you used the sounds. Congrats for your win in my contest.

The bitter cold winds on a winters day always makes the tears fall from my eyes.... but, I think there is something more to this poem than just a natural reaction to the cold.... I love the depth in this melancholy piece. Lovely work, Nette. Good luck in Andrea's contest!

This feels written from personal pain...so deeply felt nett...very moving

This is really beautifully written in a tough form Nette...wonderful

Oh, yes, putting emotions with the icy snowy day. A great idea, Nette. Better than average tetractys.

An excellent tetractys poem you've penned my very dear friend Nette. Super like. Kudos again with hugs! Thank u soo much. I'll be back to read more of your work soon ok. Anyway, I'm lookin forward for another holiday:)) Just peeking now after all my assignments tonight, whew! then, i'll go to bed in few min. Sendin u many hugs! tcare always. Tysm also for stoppin by on my latest poem. Goodnight & GBU. love lots, lors

truly ever so poetic nette, just love this,,, brings home the way it can be...

Your expressive image on sullen eyes is chilling and throbbing. I wish I wrote this magnificent poem. Nette, you drew me in!

..and yet here they are..once again. Thank you Nette

A cool scene for hot days. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Oh those poor flowers...love the imagery nette...hugs Tim

Creatively written and designed Nette!

Oh you always impress me! I love the shape it takes with the beauty of your words it is a work of art!

Wow Nette another great one! Good luck to you!

Wow Nette this is a chilling write! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx