Eyes Peeled

soured moments left behind
peeling back the lemons rind
exhausted eyes search to find
an unaffected peace of mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:07 PM
great title too!
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:07 PM
I like how you equated soured moments here with the lemon being peeled!
Watts Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 12:12 PM
This was a great haiku. The description was great.
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