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Eyes Peeled

soured moments left behind peeling back the lemons rind exhausted eyes search to find an unaffected peace of mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/26/2011 4:07:00 PM
I like how you equated soured moments here with the lemon being peeled!
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:07:00 PM
great title too!
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Date: 1/25/2011 12:12:00 PM
This was a great haiku. The description was great.
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