Eyes Open
She changes her hair hoping he would notice and give her a compliment, but he
doesn't. He exercises constantly wishes they would recognize how big his muscles are,
but they don't. They try so hard to say the right words and do the wrong things praying
they be accepted by the crowd of people who always deny them, but they still get
rejected. But He sees her ambition for love, He sees his dedication for his goals, and He
sees the will of loyalty they'll amount to. He reaches out to all of them and open His
arms to them, giving them the knowledge to see what they really desire is actually
what they despise. Everything they strived for He promised them already, and they can
alwyas run to Him for anything. -poetic
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