Eyes On Venus

Eyes on Venus

 She said.. she loves me so i ask? how much and y and if so do i love her the same way.  
  Is it enough for me and too less for her? 


Dear: Venus

  I wish i could've seen your beauty this past night but  the lenses on my glasses were foggy.  I wonder sometimes will it be a day i can hold you in my arms i wonder how life would be with out you in it every time i call your phone your line is busy is it because i just have local & not long distance calling or am i just  dialing the wrong number for what ever reason who cares. 

My Eyes on Venus
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 31, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Hi Deon, , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda
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August 17, 2013 at 9:53 PM
Deon, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ .
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