Francine Roberts Poet Rhyme

Eyes of Blue

In his blue eyes
I see the skies,
I see the ocean too.
I dream, I soar,
wanting more.
Mesmerized
by those eyes
of blue.




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12/06/2015
written by Francine Roberts
for nette' s contest
"Through Your Eyes".
visual #4, 25 words

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David Mohn June 22, 2015 at 7:56 PM This is beautifully dreamy Francine...congrats!

Skat A June 22, 2015 at 4:34 PM Francine:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2015 at 3:43 PM Nice win. PD

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2015 at 3:13 PM oh,and congrats too!

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2015 at 3:13 PM simply beautiful!!!

Paul Callus June 22, 2015 at 10:34 AM Well done Francine; in a few words you mesmerize with blue eyes! Congratulations...a deserved win! // paul

Shadow Hamilton June 22, 2015 at 2:31 AM his eyes shine out Francine lovely congrats on win hugs

Shadow Hamilton June 22, 2015 at 2:30 AM his eyes shine out Francine lovely congrats on win hugs

M.N.I.W M.N.I.W June 21, 2015 at 11:19 PM Congratulations on your poem.

Laura Leiser June 21, 2015 at 10:20 PM Congrats on your win, Francine! Well done :)

Robert Lindley June 21, 2015 at 9:15 PM Congrats on your fine win my friend, great poem. I found the 25 word limitation stifling when I wrote my entry but contest requirements had to be followed. Great contest theme...

Jan Allison June 21, 2015 at 3:23 PM absolutely gorgeous - so romantic Francine congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 14, 2015 at 11:18 AM How lovely and romantic, Francine! Best wishes and hugs, Rhonda

Judy Konos June 12, 2015 at 9:52 PM Wonderful....love it

Constance La France June 12, 2015 at 7:10 PM Francine, you have written a beautiful poem for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem fantasy

John Squires June 12, 2015 at 6:10 PM Nice picture of your feelings. Good job.