Anonomus Scorpio Poet Free verse

Eyes Like Yours Set All Apart

Set smoke, so sweet, so delicate
Something fuliginous, so intricate
Ocher bronze is all that I can see
You're beautiful, a dime to me
Spheres of the purist maple syrup
Sums them up; affectionately
Flowing through my heart, forever over my soul
Suspensions of golden medallions, never to control
Carob or chocolate cold never be
Subbed; for your lens looking at me
Caliginous, foreboding, but never forbidden
Like a chestnut mare; not broken, or ridden
My devotion is firmly planted, in your Earthly visions
You absolutely slay me with your warm decisions
Whimsical; they are made of fine mahogany
Eye's like yours set all apart; yet set me free

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Brian Sambourne May 17, 2023 at 9:07 PM Exceptionally creative. Those brown eyes are rich in allure. Congratulations! Brian Anonomus Scorpio May 20, 2023 at 10:58 AM Thank you very much! There's no finer appreciation than that of the human eye. Respectfully A.S.

Nancy Kaufman May 5, 2023 at 5:05 AM this is so lovely and descriptive. Influenced by a "Brown eyed girl" I think? I liked your analogy to maple syrup.. Anonomus Scorpio May 5, 2023 at 6:37 AM Aye brown eyes are definitely my muse! Warmly A.S.

Paige Hind April 5, 2023 at 9:11 AM Eye's like yours set all apart, yet set me free-- love this ending set off from the title. You're doing great! Anonomus Scorpio April 5, 2023 at 10:36 AM Thank you very much! Sincerely A.S.

Deb M April 5, 2023 at 8:17 AM Wow AS l just love your descriptions…”spheres of the purest maple syrup” really nice write my friend! Debx Anonomus Scorpio April 5, 2023 at 9:02 AM Thank you so very much Deb! The eyes truly are the only mysterious part of the human body. They have been a lifelong Muse of mine. Warmly A.S.