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Eyes Like Yours Set All Apart

Set smoke, so sweet, so delicate Something fuliginous, so intricate Ocher bronze is all that I can see You're beautiful, a dime to me Spheres of the purist maple syrup Somes them up; affectionately Flowing through my heart, forever over my soul Suspensions of golden medallions, never to control Carob or chocolate could never be Subbed; for your lens looking at me Caliginous, foreboding, but never forbidden Like a chestnut mare; not broken, or ridden My devotion is firmly planted, in your Earthly visions You absolutely slay me with your warm decisions Whimsical; they are made of fine mahogany Eye's like yours set all apart; yet set me free

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Date: 5/17/2023 9:07:00 PM
Exceptionally creative. Those brown eyes are rich in allure. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 5/20/2023 10:58:00 AM
Thank you very much! There's no finer appreciation than that of the human eye. Respectfully A.S.
Date: 5/5/2023 5:05:00 AM
this is so lovely and descriptive. Influenced by a "Brown eyed girl" I think? I liked your analogy to maple syrup..
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Date: 5/5/2023 6:37:00 AM
Aye brown eyes are definitely my muse! Warmly A.S.
Date: 4/5/2023 9:11:00 AM
Eye's like yours set all apart, yet set me free-- love this ending set off from the title. You're doing great!
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Date: 4/5/2023 10:36:00 AM
Thank you very much! Sincerely A.S.
Date: 4/5/2023 8:17:00 AM
Wow AS l just love your descriptions…”spheres of the purest maple syrup” really nice write my friend! Debx
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Date: 4/5/2023 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much Deb! The eyes truly are the only mysterious part of the human body. They have been a lifelong Muse of mine. Warmly A.S.

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