Eyes Like Blue Spruce

Silent lips, slightly curved upwards
Intense eyes like blue spruce, seem so cold
The fire glows and burns me with his smile
The fire bellows across my heart, an all consuming passion
When his slow southern drawl tickles my neck,
I am defenseless against his charms


Blue spruce is a blue green color, in case you don't know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mason Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Wonderful imagery here, Doris !! One of those you-had-me-at-hello moments ... smile ... love the title and wish they had this color in the box so I'd know for sure how deep a blue this is ... smile ...
Fraser Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 12:02 PM
A touch of class this poem Doris, an enjoyable read. May i say thank you for all your past comments, and i wish you all the best in your future endeavours >> James
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 9:50 PM
Those eyes sound damn sexy!!!
Loving Iii Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:12 PM
which john do you think?!
Peranteau Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 2:22 PM
Doris...this just sends me through the roof ! Wonderful ! james into my favs
Falotico Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Very well written Doris!
Keys Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 1:50 PM
how refreshing, well stated and very romantic. special moments for special people. thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 1:44 PM
So romantic...Daughter>>>Mom
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