Eyes Language

I
So love
Your neat eyes
Help me to see
More of your inner
In the mists of your eyes,
I would love to dive or fly
To get so closed to your deep thoughts
To see how high your philosophy
Eyes have their own lovely language to read.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Loving Iii Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 4:40 PM
I think the language twins use between them.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:17 AM
They really do…the I’s (eyes) have it! We see a soul beyond…sometimes deep, sometimes empty… Love that last line, dear poet!
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 3:15 PM
Thank you :-)
Daniel Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 3:46 AM
Well said, Abdullah:)
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:51 AM
Thank you lovely Joanna Daniel :-)
Poet Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 3:38 AM
Your poetry expresses some beautiful ideas! People usually think of their eyes as their hidden vault. Thanks for your comment.
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:52 AM
Thank you dear poet! You are welcome :-) Have a nice time!
Vaso Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 1:48 AM
Wonderful!
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:53 AM
Wonderful of you too :-) Have a nice time!
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 1:23 AM
It's often said the eyes are the gateway to the soul. Written in one of my favourite forms. Enjoy your weekend Abdullah. Tom
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:53 AM
So true! Thank you dear Tom Cunningham! Have a nice time!
Hind Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 9:53 PM
lovely :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:54 AM
Lovely of you too sweet Paige Hind :-) Have a nice time!
Onclaud Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 9:33 PM
lovely, charming work! all the best
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Thank you lovely poetess! Have a nice time!
Dawson Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 8:15 PM
Your poem shares some lovely thoughts!
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 8:47 PM
Thank you! Nice to read you with best warmest wishes! Have a nice day ~ AA
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