Eyes Laden With Tears

They say :
‘She lost her baby’.

But nobody in sky or earth
would tell her 
where.

I’ll try to get closer
to them all…

Seen through a tear,
the air I breathe
catches the colour of hope.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 4, 2024 at 1:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:56 AM
MIRELA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Hello Mirela, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ----SKAT
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