For Nette Onclaud's Pentastitch It Poetry Contest/ Oct. 29, 2025
Oh, his eyes dark as chocolate! Nearby the fireplace his gaze melts deliciously into mine. Those dear eyes have me mesmerized. May their sweet shimmer hold me always in the hearth of his heart.
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