Joanna Daniel Poet Verse

Eyes In Fireglow

Contest: Pentastitch It
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: 29.10.2025


Farewell, friend! 
Like sizzling embers, 
two tearglobes shimmer, 
screening photo memories! 
Life's too short! 

Heavens weep
along with my soul, 
Optic orbs burn bright
like a bursting volcano, 
Life's undone! 

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Valsa George October 31, 2025 at 9:31 PM Very poignant and a powerfully articulated angst. Congratulations dear Constance on your first place win.

Upasana Banerjee October 31, 2025 at 8:21 PM Heart wrenchingly beautiful. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2025 at 11:31 AM I am happy to see yours did really well too, Joanna. Congrats on a well deserved win

Sam Kauffman October 30, 2025 at 11:22 AM Jo, you have taken mourning into a place that all can experience with you. So well written. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of comfort to you.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2025 at 9:39 AM Wow. So interesting. You are first one I have read using the title I chose as well. It's great thinking outside the box!

Victor Buhagiar October 30, 2025 at 4:36 AM Life is always short. Afterlife is a happier and long.