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Eyes, Heart, Soul, Mind; Survivor

Sorrowful eyes, sorrowful heart. The river that crosses her cheeks, The ocean that goes to the ground. Drown her sorrows in that ocean. Lonely heart, lonely soul. Winter in imagination, The same season as his heart. Break the ice, heal the heart. Forgiving soul, forgiving mind. One apology and she has him back. No lesson learned, No hurts forgotten. Strong mind, strong heart. A thousand whips, No bruise recovered. Yet, every bruise remembered. Loving heart, loving soul. The former is not enough, The pain never goes. No love reciprocated. She knows her joy, She knows herself. Don't need another to complete her. She has survived, What's one heartbreak?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/14/2010 11:05:00 AM
Interesting write about loss love in your life..May you find that special person who will love you, complete you and enjoy sharing your life..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2010 6:51:00 AM
I love the humanity of the poem, sensibly handled and well crafted. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing it, my friend
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Date: 9/7/2010 5:06:00 AM
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:35:00 PM
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