James Faulkner Poet Haiku

Eyes Filled of Rose

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                                                  Promiscuous rose
                                              Bathing in glints of the sun
                                                  I couldn’t resist





                                                
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Paul Stacey May 27, 2009 at 3:58 AM I think this is what a haiku should be- beautiful

May 23, 2009 at 4:24 PM Glad you didn't resist because I enjoyed reading this one. Nice artistic touch too. Keep on writing. Karen

Izzy Gumbo May 22, 2009 at 6:07 PM Faints in complete delight.... This is so beautiful I could live in it. Stunning Haiku James.

Brandy Megens May 22, 2009 at 12:41 PM B E A U T I F U L

Jonay Washington May 21, 2009 at 10:25 PM touching=]]TinkBabyy

Barbara Gorelick May 21, 2009 at 6:38 PM Oh that prmiscuous rose...wonderful write...wow. BG

P Sheart May 21, 2009 at 6:01 PM Hi James Beautifully written. I can smell the aroma of that lovely rose. I agree with Christian, that first line is perfecto! A perfect Haiku! Thanks for your welcome comment on my latest. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter May 21, 2009 at 5:59 PM Wow. Truly awesome! Complete with artwork too! Excellent haiku. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins May 21, 2009 at 5:33 PM The first line is amazing...love that..wonderful haiku..good work.