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Eyes Eastward

Eyes eastward
horizon still
pale light 
quivering
above dawn's rim...
Blink twice -- 
a majestic band
wondrous-red
mounts
o'er dewy rooftops
~ dawning
    of a day's creation

Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2019

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December 7, 2019 at 6:16 PM

Love the dewy rooftops!

December 7, 2019 at 9:50 PM

You’re in a whimsical mood this evening! LOL...rewy dooftops sounds like something Scooby Doo would say :)

December 7, 2019 at 8:57 PM

I was gong to write 'rewy dooftops' -- but then my dyslexia subsided. Whew! ~ Flow NohsreG

Evelyn Judy Buehler

December 7, 2019 at 5:49 PM

Gershon, I loved this exquisite description of the birth of a new day. The title is gripping as well. :)

December 7, 2019 at 8:58 PM

Thank you for your inspirational comments, Evelyn! Appreciated. Warm wishes, Gershon

December 6, 2019 at 10:24 PM

You give such beauty to the vision you create in my head with our tender words. Ty... lovely... just lovely. Ann

December 7, 2019 at 8:55 PM

Appreciate the enthusiastc and spirited comment, Ann. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

December 6, 2019 at 9:14 PM

Lovely imagery my friend!

December 7, 2019 at 8:53 PM

Thank you so much, Caren! :) gw

December 6, 2019 at 10:43 AM

such a beautiful image you have created and shared... wonderful penning Gershon :) hugs

December 7, 2019 at 8:53 PM

Thanks for the wonderful comment, Sandy! Cheers, Gershon

December 6, 2019 at 10:01 AM

Beautifully written Gershon! :)

December 7, 2019 at 8:53 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment, Heidi! :) gw

December 6, 2019 at 9:21 AM

Sounds gorgeous my friend. Nothing better than a beautiful sunrise to start the day.

December 7, 2019 at 8:52 PM

Well, I can think of one thing better than a beautiful sunrise to start the day -- a Chris Green poem! Smiles, Gershon

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