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Eyes Eastward

Eyes eastward horizon still pale light quivering above dawn's rim... Blink twice -- a majestic band wondrous-red mounts o'er dewy rooftops ~ dawning of a day's creation

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/7/2019 6:16:00 PM

Love the dewy rooftops!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2019 9:50:00 PM

You’re in a whimsical mood this evening! LOL...rewy dooftops sounds like something Scooby Doo would say :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/7/2019 8:57:00 PM

I was gong to write 'rewy dooftops' -- but then my dyslexia subsided. Whew! ~ Flow NohsreG

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/7/2019 5:49:00 PM

Gershon, I loved this exquisite description of the birth of a new day. The title is gripping as well. :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/7/2019 8:58:00 PM

Thank you for your inspirational comments, Evelyn! Appreciated. Warm wishes, Gershon

Ann Foster

Date: 12/6/2019 10:24:00 PM

You give such beauty to the vision you create in my head with our tender words. Ty... lovely... just lovely. Ann

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/7/2019 8:55:00 PM

Appreciate the enthusiastc and spirited comment, Ann. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/6/2019 9:14:00 PM

Lovely imagery my friend!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/7/2019 8:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren! :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/6/2019 10:43:00 AM

such a beautiful image you have created and shared... wonderful penning Gershon :) hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/7/2019 8:53:00 PM

Thanks for the wonderful comment, Sandy! Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/6/2019 10:01:00 AM

Beautifully written Gershon! :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/7/2019 8:53:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment, Heidi! :) gw

Chris Green

Date: 12/6/2019 9:21:00 AM

Sounds gorgeous my friend. Nothing better than a beautiful sunrise to start the day.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/7/2019 8:52:00 PM

Well, I can think of one thing better than a beautiful sunrise to start the day -- a Chris Green poem! Smiles, Gershon