Eyes Break

walk away broken
the token of a
blasted show- i
said no- eyes
break away from
the body, i can't
breathe in & out
of my mind i
roam. don't come 
closer i see your
mouth foam dripdrop
i'm all alone on the
tiptop of desolation
hill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 5, 2010 at 7:47 PM
I enjoyed the rhyming and alliteration. You tactfully and carefully construct your words.
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