Eyes

EYES

The round-of-life scene,
Hope of hereafter,
An aspect between

Movement hinders sight      and more
A sandy beach
Spread at the shore

Glaze      crust    an itchy lid
Harsh chemicals
A thousand things hid

But now I lay me down,
Bright years in favor,
Beloved benevolent of the town

Lids drop comfortably,
A flesh-fast wall
See this dusty saffron galaxy -

All speculation, mind,
Based on ancient sacred text,
On human eyes, script of the time –

This mellow – now beige – array
Of swirling, tiny specks sifted,
Some far brightness on display

Beyond could be angels awing
So white, inner eye barely detects
But soul might hear them sing

More glorious than Cologne,
Alpine, or billowing clouds,
Their sweet voices whisper, moan

Forgot the body prime -
That ultimately false prison -
In this thoughtless region sublime

Dave Austin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Dark poems that sing seems almost the signature of many great poets of old. This very modern introspective write does justice to that form. Thank You for your beautiful words so appropriately laid out.
Kiser Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:23 PM
I love this one.
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 11:43 PM
Daver, thanks for reading that little kiss poem of mine. Nothing special. I wish I had done that for my daughter when she was young. SHe was deserving of so much more than we ever gave her as a child. I was lucky to have such a wonderful daughter.
Kiser Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 2:27 PM
A beautiful piece; my favorite part: "All speculation, mind, Based on ancient sacred text, On human eyes, script of the time –".
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Hey Daver, I only have time for this one poem at Soup and I need to get home!! Still at work but it's just to long to be here. Let me read this one now. I see you are very contemplative in this one with images of body and soul and thinking of the afterlife. Do you hope for those glorious angels, Daver? I bet they will be singing for you when you get to heaven's door!!
Austin Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:04 AM
The idea of death poems is introspection mainly. I would treat them both seriously and humorously. I've no idea what's on the other side. I merely speculate. Love, daver
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Enjoyed reading this work.."Forgot the body prime - That ultimately false prison "....It was a nice prison though..Life takes its toll..I am glad that I chose this one today..Sara
Babcock Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 11:48 AM
If you look at your last poem and this one they are the same. A mistake must have been done posting them. Just letting you know. love phyl
Austin Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Don't know what happened. Thanks. Love, daver
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