Brian Davey Poet Etheree

Eyes

Eyes
  Star lights
  Love blinks me
  Beautiful green
  Goddess Heavenly
  Gem certified staring
  Mesmerizing all of me
  Emeralds in my ocean breeze
  They light up all of my everything
  My visions love always and forever



  For contest "Eyes" 05/11/18
  Hosted by: Anthony Slauson

Placed 5th in Contest Results

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Edward Ibeh May 20, 2018 at 8:36 AM Congrats on your win, Brian!. Your beautifully written poem gives me the impetus to try this form in the future... Brian Davey May 20, 2018 at 11:40 AM Thank you, this was the first poem I have written in this form myself so I am happy that most seem to have enjoyed it. Good luck

Susan Gentry May 19, 2018 at 10:50 PM Congratulations on your win. Well done! Brian Davey May 20, 2018 at 4:40 AM Thank you Susan

Line Gauthier May 19, 2018 at 9:09 PM Congrats on your win, Brian. Brian Davey May 20, 2018 at 4:40 AM Thank you very much

Jan Allison May 11, 2018 at 2:31 PM what wonderful vivid imagery Brian, a little gem of a poem:-) hugs Jan xx Brian Davey May 11, 2018 at 10:21 PM Thank you Jan