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Eyes

Eyes Star lights Love blinks me Beautiful green Goddess Heavenly Gem certified staring Mesmerizing all of me Emeralds in my ocean breeze They light up all of my everything   My visions love always and forever For contest "Eyes" 05/11/18 Hosted by: Anthony Slauson Placed 5th in Contest Results

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Date: 5/20/2018 8:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Brian!. Your beautifully written poem gives me the impetus to try this form in the future...
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/20/2018 11:40:00 AM
Thank you, this was the first poem I have written in this form myself so I am happy that most seem to have enjoyed it. Good luck
Date: 5/19/2018 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/20/2018 4:40:00 AM
Thank you Susan
Date: 5/19/2018 9:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/20/2018 4:40:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 5/11/2018 2:31:00 PM
what wonderful vivid imagery Brian, a little gem of a poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/11/2018 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Jan

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