Eye Witness

Sole witness to the finished crime, a crystal chandelier pending above the victim. Its throng of hanging crystals tolling to the beat set by the predator's exit.

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John Fleming

Date: 6/3/2016 5:44:00 PM

Hello, Archontoula. Allow me to say it is a pleasure to make your acquaintance - Nice to meet you! Fantastic little piece of poetry...I really enjoyed reading it. My best regards! :) john P.s An obvious seven.

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 6/7/2016 2:58:00 AM

Thank you so much, John. It is a pleasure for me, too.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/23/2016 10:21:00 PM

Great!

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/23/2016 10:27:00 PM

Thank you, Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 5/19/2016 3:40:00 PM

If only objects around us could speak - fascinating imagery - love the write:-) hugs Jan xx

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/20/2016 1:24:00 AM

There are so many things they could tell us if they had a voice. But then again, that is what poetry is about, right? Giving voice to voiceless entities. Thank you for your words, Jan. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2016 10:21:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive work..I could just see the scene..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/19/2016 3:04:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. I am glad you did. I have enjoyed your poem as well.

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/13/2016 5:06:00 PM

Very interesting in suspense and suspension! Nicely done.

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/18/2016 1:36:00 AM

Suspending suspense. :) Thank you!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/9/2016 7:17:00 AM

Captivating verses, Archontoula! A seven for each!

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/9/2016 3:27:00 PM

You always come bearing encouraging comments. Thank you, Demetrios