Eye Wash
To be wakened
by drumming rain
To gaze upon
falling cleansing
It pauses
and the air
stretches
to
Waltz with the wind
Refreshed and free
Things are sweetened
Sipped
with a twist
of time
This is at the moment of observation writing
in an attempt to convey taste and wetness
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