Eye To Eye

there is a fellow named saul
who loves to play basketball
can run shoot and pass
always scores so fast
and only stands three foot tall

saul lives in the tallest tree
high as a person can be
not afraid of height
sees the stars at night
a life so happy and free

saul loves a fancy lassie
beautiful long and classy
no matter to them
she stands six foot ten
they see eye to eye you see

Tall Tales 1 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jeff Kyser
3/2/22
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Maverick Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 12:42 AM
This taxes the imagination mate.' I hope its not ' Saul that he has to Offer ' lol)))
Deschler Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Seeing eye to eye is all that really matters... I enjoyed reading your heartwarming poem this afternoon, Timothy. Very entertaining!
Gauthier Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 12:44 PM
Sweet ~
Alex Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 12:58 AM
Very interesting, indeed! Height doesn't matter. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Mcguire Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 8:03 PM
Thank you Chrisuraj!
Kyser Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 3:35 AM
Congrats on your honorable mention in the contest!
Mcguire Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 8:04 PM
Thank you Jeff, the best to you and yours!
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 9:22 PM
Oh, so much fun Timothy!! This is great :)
Mcguire Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 11:41 PM
Thank you for the kind words.
Gauthier Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Totally delightful ~ lovely, Timothy
Mcguire Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 3:59 PM
Im glad you like it. You are kind friend.
Sands Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 6:29 AM
This is great Timothy. I enjoyed your creative story :) I hope you have a nice day !
Mcguire Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 3:59 PM
I will, you just made the day better! Thanks
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