Eye To Eye

there is a fellow named saul
who loves to play basketball
can run shoot and pass
always scores so fast
and only stands three foot tall

saul lives in the tallest tree
high as a person can be
not afraid of height
sees the stars at night
a life so happy and free

saul loves a fancy lassie
beautiful long and classy
no matter to them
she stands six foot ten
they see eye to eye you see

Tall Tales 1 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jeff Kyser
3/2/22
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Date: 9/24/2022 10:48:00 AM
Seeing eye to eye is all that really matters... I enjoyed reading your heartwarming poem this afternoon, Timothy. Very entertaining!
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Date: 5/10/2022 12:44:00 PM
Sweet ~
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Date: 3/26/2022 12:58:00 AM
Very interesting, indeed! Height doesn't matter. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/28/2022 8:03:00 PM
Thank you Chrisuraj!
Date: 3/25/2022 3:35:00 AM
Congrats on your honorable mention in the contest!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/28/2022 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Jeff, the best to you and yours!
Date: 3/7/2022 9:22:00 PM
Oh, so much fun Timothy!! This is great :)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/8/2022 11:41:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words.
Date: 3/7/2022 2:25:00 PM
Totally delightful ~ lovely, Timothy
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/7/2022 3:59:00 PM
Im glad you like it. You are kind friend.
Date: 3/5/2022 6:29:00 AM
This is great Timothy. I enjoyed your creative story :) I hope you have a nice day !
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/7/2022 3:59:00 PM
I will, you just made the day better! Thanks
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