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Brian  Strand's Contest

s i n g l e e y e s N t O r I a T i A n Y et fails if truth V s T does not prevail L I then deatH A t N can only net E eyeS o R L up E L ift s T e E

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Date: 6/17/2025 3:50:00 PM
genius writing, Kim! best wishes with the contest, yellow rose
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Date: 6/17/2025 1:09:00 PM
- "the downhill was easy to read ... I struggled a bit on the "uphill" ... (poor fitness :) - Best wishes in the contest, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 2:54:00 PM
I can understand that :)
Date: 6/17/2025 12:55:00 PM
This was written very unique to you, dear Kim. Seems a warning
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 2:55:00 PM
Thank you, Paige :)
Date: 6/17/2025 12:41:00 PM
Ha, the title sure is cool!! Was this for the haiku shape contest?? I submitted an older poem. Hope I did it right becaues not all my words formed a shape.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 12:48:00 PM
Thank you!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 12:46:00 PM
Entered in Brian’s contest! I don’t do these on purpose. They come into shape as I write them :)
Date: 6/17/2025 11:06:00 AM
Exquisitely lovely and inventive in its portrayal of space; a superb poem  that is best for a  win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/17/2025 10:57:00 AM
so beautiful and creative in space, great reading, should win contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Date: 6/17/2025 10:51:00 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2025 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!

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