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Eye sores

     ribbon of highway

    gleams far into the future

       today squints... can’t see

Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2024

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Hilda Greenhough

November 23, 2024 at 8:15 PM

Highways sometimes shimmer from heat. Driving is a joy.

November 23, 2024 at 9:04 PM

Close your eyes and you'll reduce the glare! lol. ~ Blind Man's Bluff

November 23, 2024 at 9:32 AM

Great message Gershon Can't see what's in the future for America with all the chaos that is taking place around the world. A fav for being abstract and clever... Thanks for sharing my friend...

November 23, 2024 at 9:31 PM

Thank you so much for the fave, Michael. Cheers, Gershon

November 22, 2024 at 5:04 PM

Sounds about right! In the blink of an eye all different problems.

November 23, 2024 at 9:33 PM

Ha, ha. Thanks for the clever comment, Kim!

November 22, 2024 at 12:53 PM

Try Ray Bans. Still at it, I see/squint:)

November 22, 2024 at 8:30 AM

Hang on a minute Gershon, let me get my glasses.

November 23, 2024 at 9:36 PM

I'm hanging on, John....

November 22, 2024 at 5:44 AM

a metaphor meandering with so many interpretations....mental, physical, spiritual....political

November 23, 2024 at 9:38 PM

Gosh, John. I only wrote 17 syllables. (I think). THANKS! :) gw

November 22, 2024 at 5:24 AM

Oh my be careful driving Gershon!

November 23, 2024 at 9:47 PM

I drive like a grandpa, 'cos I am. Not to worry, Karen. ~ Old Man and the Wheel

November 22, 2024 at 12:46 AM

You driving blind BB!! Debx

November 23, 2024 at 9:55 PM

At least I'm not on my cell phone. Look, Mom: No eyes, no hands either. LOL. ~ gw

November 21, 2024 at 10:33 PM

Time for an upgrade lol. Tom

November 21, 2024 at 9:39 PM

Should have gone to Specsavers… Beryl

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