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Eye sores

ribbon of highway gleams far into the future today squints... can’t see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/23/2024 8:15:00 PM
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Highways sometimes shimmer from heat. Driving is a joy.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2024 9:04:00 PM
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Close your eyes and you'll reduce the glare! lol. ~ Blind Man's Bluff
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/23/2024 9:32:00 AM
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Great message Gershon Can't see what's in the future for America with all the chaos that is taking place around the world. A fav for being abstract and clever... Thanks for sharing my friend...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2024 9:31:00 PM
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Thank you so much for the fave, Michael. Cheers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2024 5:04:00 PM
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Sounds about right! In the blink of an eye all different problems.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2024 9:33:00 PM
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Ha, ha. Thanks for the clever comment, Kim!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/22/2024 12:53:00 PM
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Try Ray Bans. Still at it, I see/squint:)
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John Read
Date: 11/22/2024 8:30:00 AM
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Hang on a minute Gershon, let me get my glasses.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2024 9:36:00 PM
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I'm hanging on, John....
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2024 5:44:00 AM
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a metaphor meandering with so many interpretations....mental, physical, spiritual....political
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2024 9:38:00 PM
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Gosh, John. I only wrote 17 syllables. (I think). THANKS! :) gw
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/22/2024 5:24:00 AM
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Oh my be careful driving Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2024 9:47:00 PM
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I drive like a grandpa, 'cos I am. Not to worry, Karen. ~ Old Man and the Wheel
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Deb M
Date: 11/22/2024 12:46:00 AM
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You driving blind BB!! Debx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2024 9:55:00 PM
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At least I'm not on my cell phone. Look, Mom: No eyes, no hands either. LOL. ~ gw
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/21/2024 10:33:00 PM
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Time for an upgrade lol. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/21/2024 9:39:00 PM
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Should have gone to Specsavers… Beryl
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