Wathuto Pearl David Poet Sonnet

Eye Sonnet

In his eyes, I saw a certain divinity
that made me see his true affinity
He captivated me
When I looked at him, I could see
the colors he possessed were hard to believe
In his eyes, I saw clarity
I could not help but stay appreciating
the precious pair that glowed,
glistering with sparkle of life
Each blink revealed a new site
In his eyes, I saw and
experienced something
that I could only witness
when it is his eyes that I'm looking at....

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David Smalling March 17, 2009 at 9:36 AM Nice use of rimes and literary effects. Congratulations. God bless you Wathuto Pearl David November 5, 2023 at 5:31 PM Thank you so much David!

Keith Bickerstaffe March 17, 2009 at 1:41 AM '...appreciating...precious pair,' glowed glistering.' ...sweet alliteration. Strong phrasing and imagery... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith Wathuto Pearl David November 5, 2023 at 5:32 PM Thank you Keith, glad to call you a friend!

Neo Bridgette Kitso February 8, 2009 at 2:59 AM wow!!! really captivating. Wathuto Pearl David November 5, 2023 at 5:32 PM Thnak you so much Neo!

Belinda Parish February 7, 2009 at 4:26 PM Lovely poem. Nicely written. You can tell alot by a person eyes if you look deep enough. Wathuto Pearl David November 5, 2023 at 5:32 PM Thank you Belinda! Yes you really can.