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Eye Sonnet

In his eyes, I saw a certain divinity that made me see his true affinity He captivated me When I looked at him, I could see the colors he possessed were hard to believe In his eyes, I saw clarity I could not help but stay appreciating the precious pair that glowed, glistering with sparkle of life Each blink revealed a new site In his eyes, I saw and experienced something that I could only witness when it is his eyes that I'm looking at....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/17/2009 9:36:00 AM
Nice use of rimes and literary effects. Congratulations. God bless you
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Wathuto Pearl David
Date: 11/5/2023 5:31:00 PM
Thank you so much David!
Date: 3/17/2009 1:41:00 AM
'...appreciating...precious pair,' glowed glistering.' ...sweet alliteration. Strong phrasing and imagery... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Wathuto Pearl David
Date: 11/5/2023 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Keith, glad to call you a friend!
Date: 2/8/2009 2:59:00 AM
wow!!! really captivating.
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Wathuto Pearl David
Date: 11/5/2023 5:32:00 PM
Thnak you so much Neo!
Date: 2/7/2009 4:26:00 PM
Lovely poem. Nicely written. You can tell alot by a person eyes if you look deep enough.
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Wathuto Pearl David
Date: 11/5/2023 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Belinda! Yes you really can.

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