Eye Sea

Give me Death and lay me on sand 
Spell out words that make no sound 
Just dull, Dull all round 
Heart has left it's place and flown 
flown to hell! 
Leaving no dust or scar 
Just imagine a life as empty as mars 
Lower, lower than ground 
Under the sea hidden in shells 
that's where my body dwells
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 11:45 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Welcome to soup..Very poetic work..Sara
Mcallister Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 10:39 AM
you are a poet
Breidenthal Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Amazing piece here. Filled me with sadness and wonder. Always, Laura
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 11:25 AM
A deep and strong poem Sarah, well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise
Aderounmu Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Sarah, it's great to know that the next door opens to heaven just a knock will perform a wonder. Just a turn takes you to paradise we need to look up there hangs our help we keep looking down and all we see is hell. Cheers.
Palmer Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 8:46 AM
you are a pearl,thats what is hidden in shells,now climb your way to the surface,leave hell behind,great write Sarah
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