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Eye sea

Give me Death and lay me on sand Spell out words that make no sound Just dull, Dull all round Heart has left it's place and flown flown to hell! Leaving no dust or scar Just imagine a life as empty as mars Lower, lower than ground Under the sea hidden in shells that's where my body dwells

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/21/2013 11:45:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Welcome to soup..Very poetic work..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2012 10:39:00 AM
you are a poet
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Date: 8/17/2012 2:14:00 PM
Amazing piece here. Filled me with sadness and wonder. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/16/2012 11:25:00 AM
A deep and strong poem Sarah, well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise
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Date: 8/15/2012 1:22:00 PM
Sarah, it's great to know that the next door opens to heaven just a knock will perform a wonder. Just a turn takes you to paradise we need to look up there hangs our help we keep looking down and all we see is hell. Cheers.
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Date: 8/14/2012 8:46:00 AM
you are a pearl,thats what is hidden in shells,now climb your way to the surface,leave hell behind,great write Sarah
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