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Struggles come Life isn’t always easy I work and work Grumbling until it hits me I don’t have to do this stuff God blessed me so I get to! Bite Size Poem Number 16 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier August 2, 2021

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Kim Merryman

Date: 8/10/2021 7:38:00 PM

A wonderful message, Gina! One I needed to see this evening. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/10/2021 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Gary Radice

Date: 8/9/2021 12:59:00 PM

I often felt this way when I was working full time Regina and at some point decided that I would work to live rather than live to work. Nice poem. Cheers - Gary

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/2/2021 11:50:00 AM

Hello Regina, this is a good way to look at things we do to be done. I like the last line of the poem. blexsings my friend.