Eye of the Storm

Someone's at the door

         Irma, she's not welcome here

                                            Furious cyclops.




Composed on 6th September 2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 8:00 PM
An excellent haiku Roy. Love the last line especially. Well done and enjoyed!
Pett Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 4:23 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Susan. :))
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 3:17 AM
- Irma is not welcome anywhere ... she's evil ! - Well done, Roy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 4:50 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Anne-Lise, I can't imagine how horrific and devastating this disaster has affected the poor residents, absolutely awful.
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Way to do the theme if this is for that hurricane contest. It's scary as heck!!
Pett Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 4:27 AM
Thanks Andrea, totally agree I feel so sorry for those poor people affected by this awful disaster. Thanks again for your support. :)
Sands Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 1:07 PM
I agree Roy. This one is a bad one. Very concerning.
Pett Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Hi Heidi, I have only experienced winds of 55 mph so can't even imagine what this would be like, horrendous.
Sands Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 5:34 AM
So true Roy! Good one.
Pett Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Thank you so much Heidi, this sounds like a horrific disaster.
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 5:18 AM
Lovely depiction-- a timely emotion--well done, Roy!
Pett Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 10:29 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, so many natural disasters on Earth but this sounds really bad.
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