Eye of the Hurricane

In chaos set sail
where pain barbs assail,
yet retaining poise,
in life's fearsome noise.

To become as such,
we must feel God's touch,
moment to moment;
then no fears torment.

18-October-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kyser Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 9:02 PM
Nice jueju - haven’t written one in a while! Take care
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October 17, 2022 at 9:17 PM
Happy you enjoyed, Jeff. I like this form ~ rhythm in brevity
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